The Claim: Stating What the Point Proves
Every point begins with a claim sentence that states, in plain language, exactly what that point proves about the thesis. You will be able to write a claim sentence that is specific and directly tied to the thesis.
A Claim Is Not a Topic Label
A weak claim just names a topic, like 'my first point is about inflation,' while a strong claim states an actual argument, like 'cooling inflation data gives the Federal Reserve room to cut rates without reigniting price growth.' The claim should be arguable and specific enough that a listener immediately understands what evidence would be needed to prove it.
Tying the Claim Back to the Thesis
A claim should use language that echoes the thesis so the judge hears the throughline, not a disconnected mini-essay. If the thesis promises three reasons the Fed will cut rates, each claim should explicitly be one of those three reasons stated as a complete, provable sentence.
Thesis: "The Federal Reserve will cut interest rates in 2025 because of cooling inflation, a softening labor market, and mounting political pressure."
Point one claim: "First, cooling inflation data gives the Federal Reserve the room it needs to cut rates without reigniting price growth." This claim echoes the thesis's first named reason, states an actual argument rather than a bare topic, and sets up exactly what evidence should follow.
1. What is wrong with the claim 'my first point is about inflation'?
Answer all 1 to check.
A point's claim must state a specific, provable argument that echoes the thesis, not just label a topic.